My Night Essay

 This is the first paragraph of my Night Essay. Let me know what you guys think! 
(keep in mind this is a VERY rough draft)

In The Last Book in the Universe by Rodman Philbrick follows Spaz, a teenage boy who lives in a dystopian universe, who received a letter from his foster family telling him that his step-sister Bean has been diagnosed with Leukemia. Spaz decides to travel several hundred miles to get to her in hopes that they can find a cure. In The Glory Field by Walter Dean Myers follows Elijah, an African-American boy, who has to overcome inequality and prejudice. Night by Elie Wiesel is an autobiography about his life during World War II. These three characters demonstrate immense bravery different ways. As seen in Spaz, Elijah, and Elie’s stories, bravery can help transform the world for the better.

Changing The World

Hey guys! This weeks prompt is 'What innovation has most transformed the world? Why?'. 

There are so many inventions that have made out world a better place. Millions of years ago fire was discovered and helped people stay alive. But more recently iPhones and computers have been created. 

People have argued that technology has corrupted out world. I some what agree, but it is also one of the greatest inventions ever. One of the things it has helped is Education. Schooling has improved immensely since technology became a thing. Before technology was created students had to sit in classrooms and have a teacher lecture, which studies have shown isn't the best way to learn. Now we have more interactive class activities using smart boards or iPads.